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#201 ReturnoftheSoup

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Posted 14 June 2010 - 02:31 AM

Here's a bump, so it's easier to find. I hope any new readers find the story engaging. I'd love to rewrite it and someday I will.

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Posted 14 June 2010 - 02:39 AM

Here's a bump, so it's easier to find. I hope any new readers find the story engaging. I'd love to rewrite it and someday I will.


Im not gonna go through this whole thing and read through your life story, is their anything in particular you want to point out. Because in my opinion you can really justify walking out on what you were sworn to do. It's not like quitting a job at ****ing burger king.

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Posted 14 June 2010 - 02:49 AM

Im not gonna go through this whole thing and read through your life story, is their anything in particular you want to point out. Because in my opinion you can really justify walking out on what you were sworn to do. It's not like quitting a job at ****ing burger king.


I'm sorry that you feel that way.

It's not my life story, though, I get through the foundation in a few brief pages. This is the story of the two worst things I've ever done in my life. There are three timelines, the timeline for when I was 17-18, the timeline for 21-22 (military,) and then present day irrelevancies. It's real and true, it's entertaining and it's purpose is to give a little insight into what I did, sort of why but not really and exactly how I did it.

There's no one particular thing I want to point out.

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Posted 23 June 2010 - 03:23 AM

Here's a bump, for anyone who'd care to read this seemingly endless piece.

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 05:01 AM

For anyone logged on today who may not have been an active poster during the summer of 2010, I offer you this. Feel free to comment or question.

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 10:46 AM

I have, for the first time since I've written it, read this work through. I implore those who enjoy a good story, to read this.

I am currently working on another book, though it won't be published here..maybe.

Anyway....BUMP!

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:22 PM

I've begun the editing process on this, off-line.

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 04:08 AM

Here's a bump for new readers.

I don't know what it was, really, but something about her led me to believe that she was the kind of girl who could keep a secret.

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Posted 13 March 2018 - 02:53 AM

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Is Mozzez your actual father?!


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Posted 13 March 2018 - 03:23 AM

I have held more jobs than anybody I've ever met. There's no way you can keep yourself from judging me, but please don't hate me.

In Order:
McDonalds
Hardees
Steak N Shake
Hardees
The Old Spaghetti Factory - busser
Laffite's - busser
Some Ice Cream Shop/Food Restaurant - Server
Cafe Balaban - busser
Jack N the Box
Cafe De France - assistant waiter
Steak N Shake - waiter
Tony's (a five star restaurant) - assistant waiter
Dominic's
Some other Italian Place
Fabio's Gian Fabio's
J.C. Penny
Maggie O'Briens - valet parker
Player's island - valer parker
Applebee's - server
temp service - construction
temp service- cherry sorter
St. Louis Steakhouse - valet parker
Dohack's- server
Culpepper's - Server
Eagle Scaffolding
U.S. Army
President Casino - Valet Parker
Applebee's - bartender
Holiday Inn - bartender
Some Trendy Boutique Hotel - bartender
Robata of Japan - bartender/bar manager
Pennsylvania Life - Life Insurance Salesmen
Autocenters - car Salesmen
Solo Insurance - Insurance Agent
Custom Insurance - Insurance Agent
James Andrew Gmac - Real Estate Agent
Re/max - Real Estate Agent
GreenTree Real Estate - Owner/Broker
AA Mobile Homes - Trailer mover/installer
Jasid Construction - Drywall Hanger
Chesterfield Drywall - Drywall Hanger
Builder's Bloc - Framing Carpenter
The Hyatt - bartender
Maggie O'briens - bartender
Lobby Shop - Owner

To make a really long story short.


I think I may have had as many and a similar start lol
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Posted 13 March 2018 - 10:49 AM

Crazy how this was 8 years ago and myself, Smooth/WVU and KFM/Jason H. are all still here right along with ya, Soup! Time flies...
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Posted 13 March 2018 - 12:42 PM

Crazy how this was 8 years ago and myself, Smooth/WVU and KFM/Jason H. are all still here right along with ya, Soup! Time flies...


It was so poorly written. I could do so much better now.

After I wrote that I had these ideas about maybe becoming a writer, and I started writing all the time. I wrote a few short stories and I made a couple attempts at writing books, but I got away from that. I haven't scribbled more than a few sentences together in over five years other than this forum, the occasional text message or the infrequent email. But I'm so disappointed when I read this, so artless and aimless, that I feel an itch to try tell this story again.
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Posted 13 March 2018 - 01:07 PM

Is Mozzez your actual father?!

Thankfully no. But I do agree with their assessment of him those many years ago.

See, I will add I either forgot, or did not know. Soup is a confessed deserter as well. It goes great with his list of accomplishments.


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Posted 13 March 2018 - 01:22 PM

Thankfully no. But I do agree with their assessment of him those many years ago.

See, I will add I either forgot, or did not know. Soup is a confessed deserter as well. It goes great with his list of accomplishments.


I am incredibly honest.

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Posted 14 March 2018 - 04:28 AM

It was so poorly written. I could do so much better now.
After I wrote that I had these ideas about maybe becoming a writer, and I started writing all the time. I wrote a few short stories and I made a couple attempts at writing books, but I got away from that. I haven't scribbled more than a few sentences together in over five years other than this forum, the occasional text message or the infrequent email. But I'm so disappointed when I read this, so artless and aimless, that I feel an itch to try tell this story again.


I wouldn't. If there is beauty in this it's the fact that, that is exactly how you were, how you saw those moments at that time that you wrote it. We change in eight years. Our perspective is always changing, we're always evolving as people.

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Posted 14 March 2018 - 04:30 AM

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the free candy sign on your van says otherwise!


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